Mi primera poesía


Esto es una consigna que hicimos en clase en lengua


Ultima hora,
Esto Es lo peor,
Mientras mas lo piensas,
Esto es un horror,
Esperando que toque la campana,
Mientras escucho música sobre amor,
No puedo mas no quiero esperar,
Que suerte ya me voy,
En micasa me divierto aun mas que un calmar.




                  

Comentarios

  1. Laura Smiet8 de octubre de 2015, 2:11 p.m.

    ¡Buen trabajo Nacho! Ésta es la primera poesía de varias que se aventurarán a escribir este trimestre. Hiciste un buen trabajo con la rima, se me ocurre que otra posibilidad es invertir una de las líneas del final. Fijate cómo queda y pensá cuál de las dos versiones preferís en cuanto a su sonoridad:
    "Mientras escucho música sobre amor,
    qué suerte ya me voy.
    No puedo más no quiero esperar
    En mi casa me divierto aún más que un calamar."

    Recordá revisar la tildación antes de publicar tus entradas y te pido que intentes volver a subir la foto, ya que no se cargó.

    Satisfactorio.

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  2. Laura Smiet8 de octubre de 2015, 2:11 p.m.

    Recordá que otro requisito es que a la izquierda de tu blog figure la lista de etiquetas y que cada entrada también las tenga. Así cada profesor puede ir específicamente a las entradas de su materia y no tiene que revisar todo tu blog.

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  3. florencia barletta17 de noviembre de 2015, 5:42 a.m.

    Falta publicación de arte.

    ResponderBorrar

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